Story practising - Women for Cavemen

This is part of a comic / storyboard project I did a while back. Something I still want to become better at. So if you got any advises, links or feedback - please do share then

It's in a foreign language, mine, danish that is - since it was also used in a school paper.
- the title: Women - for cavemen, by me and a friend. Is suppose to be like a manual on how women works, then again not really. It's a fun idea with a few more pages of ideas pitched that we might get to one day.

So even though you might not get the texting, I am sure you'll get the story behind it. What do you think? I'd like to try using different perspectives and views a lot more, but it didn't need to be the case in this one as far as I think.

Oh yeah, sorry about the bad quality - it's a scan of the comic from the paper, because well... I lost the file in a crash and my usb carrying it have broken. And the Schoolpaper of course didn't save the file either...